Having completed the first draft of my music video, I feel as though my music video is beginnning to look more like a music video rather than a random sequence of shots; the use of lip syncing has really improved my video, as it now has more depth and is much easier to understand. Whilst I am quite pleased with the outcome of my first draft, there is still room for improvement. Having analysed the content and made my own assumptions of what needs improving, I've gained feedback from my teacher and a few peers in order to improve the final draft.
My initial thoughts:
- More lip syncing shots
- More close ups of nature, possibly contrast shots of autumn nature with spring/summer nature
- Lighting - some shots are darker than others
- Minor continuity error - actress is wearing different shorts in some shots
- Style fits with the song
- Use more shots of horses or remove them altogether
- More shots at the bridge
- Clearly presents an abstract style
- Shot as actress comes from below the branches is nice 0:30
- Good choice of angle and lighting 1:38
- Have actress expressing emotions of the song through facial expressions/body language
- More lip syncing shots
- Use more effects such as cross dissolves
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